1)At the beginning the ancient mariner walks up to a wedding guest telling a story about himself stuck in the middle of the ocean.
2)They were having a jolly time when sooner on it takes a turn.
3)Stuck in the ice but. A little friend coming by bringing the mist and the cloud and always coming by to have all of their resources.
4) It was an ALBATROSS! Always making or days grey just like the devil who wanted us to pay.
5)With one mighty shot the albatross went down in a flame (Not really i just like rhymes) in all of it’s glorious fame my crossbow empty like a lifeless empty crate.
6) As the mist faded away with the devil by it’s way everything went back to normal.
7)Are throats coughing up dry spit just like a lama with very dry spit.
8)Is this it is this it being teased by the water with the albatross looking up at us on the rusty old ship that’s just a drip of a lifetime.
October 9, 2016 at 4:09 pm
These are definitely 8 key events, nicely done. I’d encourage you to avoid being to informal in your language when writing summaries, as this will sometimes obscure the clarity of what you’re trying to express – summaries should not comment on the work, simply transmit aspects of it
October 10, 2016 at 11:57 am
Rhymes are cool but maybe i used to much i used to be a great poet at primary school.
October 10, 2016 at 11:57 am
I’m sure you’re still a great poet, Hogarth!