Author: Hogarth

At the end of the path

there was a staff

that shined in the dark.

The shine was so bright

it lit up the room there

was tomb.

Inside of that tomb there

was a dead body inside with

it’s eyes open wide.

It seemed fresh but

it was dead

just like that chopped off head.

The head had marks

like something had torn

through the head of a forgotten crew.

As I looked at the staff

shining on the bloody

path I felt a rumble and a crumble.

As something came through!

It was big and it looked like it was wearing a wig

it was green and gooey and wet as sweat.

But I didn’t hesitate I reacted fast

and ran and I took the staff

along the bloody path as I from then escaped!

THOU:Archaic or dialect form of you, as the singular subject of a verb.

QUOTH:Said(Used only in first and third person singular before the subject).

EFTSOONS:Obsolete or archaic way of saying “soon afterward” from Old English.

MINSTRELSY:The activity of performing as a minstrel or the occupation of a minstrel.

DISMAL:Causing a mood of gloom or depression.

HOLLO:Used to attract attention(As when a fox is spied during a fox hunt).

VESPERS:A service of evening prayer in the divine office of the Western christian church(Sometimes said earlier in the day).

NOR:Used before the second or further of two or more alternatives(The first being introduced by a negative such as ‘neither’ or ‘not’).

TWAS:Archaic for It was.

PARCHED:Make or become dry through intense heat.

VEERED:Change direction suddenly.

Agape:(Of a person’s mouth)Wide open in surprise or wonder.

GRAMERCY:Archaic used to express surprise or gratitude.

BETWIX:Archaic term for between.

GOSSAMERES:Gossameres is something super fine and delicate.

ELFISH:It means charmingly mischievous or sprightly.

DANK:Unpleasantly damp or cold.

SERE:Dry or withered.

CLEFT:Split,divided,or partially divided into two.

SUMMARY: In the beginning of the Ancient Mariner the Mariner kills an albatross taking away the mist and cloud giving them a clear path to sail. The men all die whilst looking at the Mariner but there bodies did not rot nor stop looking at the Mariner. He later on can not pray but as he looks at the sea snakes the curse was broken and then now he could pray. Whilst on the boat the Mariner sees light and it’s coming from the shore from a light house but all of a sudden! The pilot come and the pilots boy.At the end the Mariner says farewell farewell.

MY OWN STORY: TWAS a beautiful day inside me just playing on my computer whilst I had my game face and I was playing MINE CRAFT “YES!” QUOTH me as i got my last achievement. As I spawned in the cave it felt DANK as I saw the ELFISH Zombie give me a glare.As my mouth AGAPE in horror A whore of creepers come as I run away in fear I start to feel hot I start to feel SERE as I end up in a desert. As I notice i’m BETWIX the desert and winter plains as I VEERED into the winter plains I feel like an ice sculpture as I get DISMAL I see my house in bits I run to it wondering what happened here as I look around I see dead horses and llamas staring up at me (Reference to the Ancient Mariner) All of the horses with scratch marks and all of llamas with blaze marks it was NOR great at all. As I look I see a nether portal ahead of me what could be in there I thought and as I walk through I come face to face with a pig-man-zombie! It also has a golden sword thats what probably gave the horses scars.But As I slash at the P.M.Z (Short for pig-man-zombie)It attracts a whole lot more as I ran I got away but then I see a weird structure but above it is glow stone that looks GOSSAMERE(S) But as I think I remember the name this dark red structure thing it’s called the nether fortress! But EFTSOONS I saw something strange looking I think there called a blaze but I had to act fast these creatures are strong but when i dogged  they fired out FIRE! But now it adds up to burnt llamas so without further a do i did the same thing back then I ran.Then I saw a mysterious figure with white lifeless eyes behind something and he said this is all because of THOU it was just weird so I thought of him as a crazy guy! And then right behind me with PARCHED breath on my neck I looked behind and saw a ghast I heard of these before they have been said to let out explosive fire thats what must of destroyed my house but I would have knew if the breeze didn’t takeaway the fire. But sadly as I ran i got CLEFT by a P.M.Z but the same one with the little scar i gave it. So as now i’m dead I don’t really know what to do but i have heard VESPERS if you die and lose everything you can just restart a new world.

The sound devices he uses is sort of smart instead of using “I heard the waves of the sea”.He used a lot more describing to it like this.”The waves swayed passed the haunted boat where the dead men lay”.So to say he is better at describing than a normal poet.

The sound devices he uses is sort of smart instead of using “I heard the waves of the sea”. He used a lot more describing to it like this.”The waves swayed passed the haunted boat where the dead men lay.So to say he is better at describing sounds then a normal poet.

In part the seventh they meet a hermit.

Brown skeletons it also has a wolf eating the she wolfs young.

The mariner stood on the land for once.

The wedding guest soul was  alone on a wide wide sea.

He said goodbye to the wedding guest.

The ship was going fast without no wave or wind.

It was a calm night and the dead men stood together.

The mariner saw a light house in joy.

The sky started to change crimson colours.

A pilot came and coming fast.

HOGARTH HAS $WAG YO!

Oh sleep! it is a gentle thing,

Beloved from pole to pole!

To Mary Queen the praise be given!

She sent the gentle sleep from Heaven,

That slid into my soul.

The silly buckets on the deck,

That had so long remained,

I dreamt that they were filled with dew;

And when I awoke, it rained.

My lips were wet, my throat was cold,

POETRY BY HEART YO!

The wedding guest was scared of the ancient mariner and his skinny hand.

The ancient mariner couldn’t pray.

The dead men on the deck did not  rot and they were still looking at the ancient mariner.

The ancient mariner watched the water snakes in the sea.

The albatross came off his neck into the sea and now he could pray.

METAPHOR:

THY SKINNY HAND

What it means by that is it’s like his hand is a skeletons hand because he hasn’t drank anything for ages meaning he is starting to look like a skeleton.

At the beginning of part the third they were thirsty and hungry

Secondly the ancient mariner looks westward and thinks he sees something in the sky

Thirdly he thinks he sees a ship but on board that ship is a woman next to her stands her mate – death

Fourthly the ancient mariner  hears the woman say  “I’v’e won I’v’e won!”

Fifthly they all curse him with their eye and drop to the ground one by one DEAD

With blacked lips backed means the sun has dried up their lips and now they are cooked